Comments : Love Has No Hold on Me

  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    I hate this line with a passion:
    Hon, I’ll tell you right now
    Nothing will ever be the same
    You don’t need anymore f u c king excuses
    I’m done playing our game
    I really hate it, but it's really good I know, and probably full of feeling and passion. I like the poem though, you're really good

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Once again, written deep and with such passion! I have fallen in love with your writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Thesoftdarkness

    Very nice job!! very insightful and very true to what happens in life