Hey there,
*tear* wow.. this is really sad.. very heartfelt. I like the way you repeated teh same line in the beginning of every stanza."
Look deep into my eyes,
Do you see all the lies?
When you walk past ignoring,
A part of me dies.
I love that stanza.. it stayed with me. no1 wants to be ignored. well god job hun. take care
Monique

P.S. could you read, and comment and rate some of my stuff please? Poems such as, "stolen innocence" or "insecurity" thanks

Wow, that's really good, I totally loved it, I can really relate, I like how you started with Look deep into my eyes everytime, it really held the whole thing together, great job!

I keep coming back to your poems because they are so deep, so honest and so real. I think you're wonderful!