Wow.. thats really deep.. amazing job.. I'm sort of speechless, very creative and unique and well thought out. 5/5

"Happily ever after
Society's unrealistic romantic scale
Happily ever after
Society's cookie cutter fairy-tale"

I especially liked that part, but this is an amazing poem throughout.
Beautiful.

Wow .. loved it.

This is a better example of what I commented about on the first poem.

"Every little girl is raised to
Believe
That she has a prince
Waiting
for her on one
Knee"

The pauses in this one were needed. Every word after created a new meaning. Unlike the first poem.

"There is a man who can love you with cheer" That line didn't really fit. It looked force.

Anyways, the 2 poems I read I would give a 5, because I cannot judge a person's poetry, since it's personal, and I am not you.

Great job. I like the thought of someone out there. . .*