That was SO beautiful
the words flowed in to each other and created such a beautiful poem by you
OMG
I love poems like this thank you so much for sharing
I hope this is alright as a comment
omg great poem
loved it im voting after this 5/5 keep up this great work
EM

Wow BJ, Awsome poem. I loved it. it flowed very good. Keep up the good work.

~Joe~

Omg sweetie dat poem is so bootiful i hope u to can make it work i know how much you love him and omg ur poems are like soo good take care bootiful love ya loads

Aimee xoxoxoxox

Wow... i really like this poem a lot its beautiful... very nice job wirting it... keep it up...

sammie

Aww wow hunz..Great job!..Beautifully writen! Loved it. 5/5
Love you lots,
Neha

BJ, that was a brilliant poem! I loved the emotion it displayed. It was wonderfully written and expressed.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5

Wow i really love it i feel the same way with my g/f i really can relate to it keep it up its really good

kevin

Really gud 2. i really loved it. ur gud bj. love ya. kisses and hugs

Hope is so hard to find...
Trusted sm1 is harder to beleive...
Just beleive in wut u want n within him,
and he will never let u down....

Well another true poem...7/5..
take care
alex

I definitely LOVE this poem from beginning to end. This is exactly how i feel about my boyfriend/baby daddy. We've been through alot and I know we can get through anything together but it feels like he's giving up and slipping away. I understand what this poem is about.