Dean so sad...
But lovely to read i can really relate to it
Your very talented!!
Dont give up writing!!
xxx

Great poem. easy to relate to and pritty well written

I agree, its very easy to relate to... its really beautiful, but i hope even if people are depressed they will atleast get to have a small sniff at the scent of roses?

Really sad, but very well written... easily can feel your pain

I think it is very good, try to add on some more.

Love it ...
so great so much pain and saddness
but it just flows
great job
xox robyn

It's so sad.
But it is so good. It flows so well. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it.

Lol i like the twists ur note like other poets but a poet u are

Very well written. I can relate so well. BTW that poem that I wrote was from last year. I just wanted some opinions on it. Check out my other work. They're not as depressing.