This is honestly the best poem ive ever read on this site! omg, i just loved it so much. Your so good at putting words together. 5/5

Wow i love this poem alot please vote and comment on the top first poem on my page. Continue the sme you already know the name

Dark, and sad. This is one of the better fallen angel poems I have read

Amazing descriptions you have there. A sad tale of a fallen angel. I would really like it to be longer, it's so sad that I was hoping for a different ending. Nonetheless, a truly emotional piece. Despair speaks so strongly through the words.

Great stuff. Thanks for sharing. =)

Wow that was amazing you captured my attentiona and kept it until the end

Really good poem with a nice rythmn, superbly written!

You have managed to paint the picture of this fallen angel very well with your lovely descriptions and imagery.
Good write!
5/5