Wow, amazing poem! excellently written, the words are so powerful.5/5.
take care,
xxEmmaxx

Great poem it has such a strong meaning. I suggest seprating the stanzas though. Keep up the good work.

I loved it. you're a excellent poet. you should put more up.

Speechless and understood completely

I really liked the poem.. it was very good...

Wow, i like this. great job u have serious talent 5/5

You have so much talent! I love this poem! The flow and way you worded everything is perfect--The only error I found is:

''I'm dieing tonight''
It is spelled ''dying''

Small error---Overall amazing write! 5/5

"As I consider the possibility
Considering the possibilities"

I think you must have meant to do that, but it does sound a little much..

Other than that though, I like it. These four lines:

"Haunting of my past and future
destroying what is left of sanity.
The sweet sorrow of death
comforting me as I sleep"

What a great way to open up the poem. I knew I was going to enjoy reading the rest just from those lines - and I wasn't disappointed.

And I had to reread, to get past the words, to what you was actually saying in this piece.
A great poem. x