Thank you for the comment you left on my poem, I appreciate it. I like this poem very much. The line where it says "but the streak of blood from your mouth to chin betrays you" Stood out to me very much, and I definetly liked this line. Good write.

I really like your style, I love the description =) another very good poem!

This is really good! :) 4/5

Mallori

I love the way you write
it tells of a story and has so much meaning
another good one by you
good job