I didn't fully understand the whole meaning adn story behind the poem, but it flowed really well : ) i like the title, very catching. lol.

with love, Suzie

It was good keep it up ur awesome

Wow, awsome poem. I loved it. you have an awsome talent, keep writting.

~Joe~

I really liked it, the description of the scenary was really detailed and painted a great picture, keep it up hun!

Very nice! At one point you went off into a whole other writing... Well I can't think of the word I am looking for... You could try editting it to make some more spaces, it was good though!

I'm about to get off the net but i wanted to read something of yours first, this is really good!
great work!!!
love sammi,

ill read more later!!! :)