Wow katie, thats such a powerful poem, and really origional idea. i loved it! and u haven't failed at all, often it is so difficult to put our emotions into words. the words u used here created a perfect poem!
love u lots, xxxxxxxxxxxx

~*I really liked this one, great work 5/5 and thx alot for the comments means alot belive it or not, well hope ur doing ok*~ XoXo