YOu seemed to repeat a few things several time, making this poem feel like a run on. It's really good other then that.!

Creepy and dark. Brilliantly done. You portrayed the character very well in this poem. The descriptions and all are vivid and strong. A poem for a length like this, a great amount of effort has to be done.

I like how you could make a poem of this length flow so well, nice work, really. It was an interesting read. Thanks for sharing. =)