Hey me again thats really good!!
i get bullied alot coz i like the military and i know its not fair. i know its not fun and it makes u hav a really good look at your life and if its worth living or not. nice ending (referring to bright stars) it worked well. 5/5
amy

That was a good poem
it really was
i was bullied in high school too.
sorry about you friend
5/5

Lovely. wonderful. it is offten so easy to ignore some ones suffering. i hope your poem will help people look out for each other.

Ruby

I love this poem! I'm sorry about your friend, but remember that everthing they do will come back to them.

Im really sorry for your friend R.I.P. No deserves to be push to the limit like this, its so cruel. Your right you only have one chance at life, it shouldnt be upto someone else to take it away from you, in a sense of mentality, so much so you take your own life. Anyway, well written poem, it flows a rhymes beautifully, beautifuly and sad poem, well done, your so talanted, keep it up,
Love
~She Died Screaming