Wow. So you wrote this one line a day!? That must have took long hehe. But it was worth it! Cause it is an excellent poem. Very well done. I absolutely loved it! Keep it up!!!! -xxx-

I don't cry at all, but that almost got me there

I wonder what made me so late in reaching this one...its an amazing poem

You used to say you thought of me, when you had been away.
But this time it seems to me, that away is where you'll stay

i loved this one...waiting for someone to sing these words for me..:o)

great poem once again dear...keep it up

Aww hunni, i can feel the dispointment and sorrow.