Comments : I promise...

  • 18 years ago

    by MisterScabbedWings

    "A fire that will never extinguish, as long as there is oxygen"

    i really liked that part. and i know how you feel. great poem.

    -PG-

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    I can feel the pain of a broken heart in ur words. good write!!!!!!!!
    but cheer up dear!
    keep smiling