Nicely done....I can feel the anguish.

Yes me too.. The anguish bites you... I'm sure the wait will be over soon, and I'm certain it will be worth waiting for. All love is :)

It's short but I can emphathize with you and what you tried to depict in your poem. I think it very good

Jessica,

This was a beautiful, tender loving piece of writing, well done! It is all so worthwhile in the end.

Warmest regards,

Steve

I truly love how you write.... each write is short but so powerful.... this one is filled with desire for the one you love and long for......

Awwww...when i read the part about the knock at the door reminds me of that White Stripes song "My Doorbell"...

*I'm thinkin 'bout my doorbell, when ya gonna ring it, when ya gonna ring it?*

sweet and sad, just how i like them!