Yes, yes, yes.
"Untamed, I am out of control;
Spitting spite at all my friends.
Feeble apologies crumble in my throat
as the vicious thorns rip from my mouth -
And the wounds stain my heart."

This was me today. You really have a connection with me, I like the parallel your title is on...I sense a biblical connection?

[lostlaureate - come find me]

This is a well composed peice, short but saying an awful lot. you have managed to contain a lot of meaning into very few words

5/5

Aww, short and effective, I know some people critisise short poems but I think they can be even more effective
WD :)

It was effective, emotional and presented well.
x

I know happens sometimes eh.
Nice and sharply written poem.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

It's nicely descriptive, but when considering the reason for its creation I do have to wonder why it is as raw as it is.

Something to ponder, perhaps.

Bret

Interesting poem, I can see you had something build up inside you and you wanted to let it out. I do that alot with my writing. 5/5