Interesting poem...won't say it's really good...but atleast you tried...well...pretty good for a starter...keep it up...

I liked it.
The lines and structure could use some work..but the emotion, which is the essential, is there.
Maybe i like it also because i can relate, and i loved the adjectives you used.
take care xoxo

Hey darl. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this t0o. very t0uching. g0od j0b 0n it! keep it up

I love the wya you did the last 2 sentences. it shows so much emotion. good job

Wow, nice poem. very well written.keep up the good work!! thanx for my comment
Rosie xXx

Heya!
This is good, first of all it would be easier to read if you corrected the spellingbut that dosn't matter.
What matters is the poem and yes you have a way with words =)
I enjoyed this because I know what it feels like to lose the person who tought would never betray you!
Well done, ths was so full of emotion and anger and at the end you really showed how you felt towards him!

Lisa xD

Dude is this about me!?!?

A few hurtful words
said in great rash
I cannot believe
made our friendship ties dash

I was upset, I was concerned
what you said suprised me
the words came out
before my mind caught on with reality

Now I feel though that what we had
was not as strong as you make out
as a couple of misused words
ended it suddenly with a simple clought

I do not blame you
but you should not blame me
friendship holds stronger bonds
forgiveness and humanity

Forgiveness is all that I ask
but if you decide that I only kid
please remember this and this only
words mean nothing, our friendship did