DAMN! this iz a really goood poem! keep it up!

**thanx 4 ur comment!

** LOL...it DOES sound like...um...trevor?!

This was a really, well, let's just say this poem was all over the place. What would be nice, is if you broke it up into verses. In each verse, keep all the ideas that are similar in it. It makes it easier to read. I'll give you a 5, because although it was hard to read, the poem itself was good.

Also, the title needs to be better.

I feel that...all gangstas are the same. I loved your poem keep doin what you do.