Truly love how you wrote this.... touching and heartfelt, sad but beautifully written...

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Anthony... Brilliant poem! A nice dream, such a shame it wasn't true. I liked the flow. I especially liked the way that you took me from believing your hope had gone to having everything you desired right in front of you. Then it slipped off a slidey cliff and you were sad again. I'm sure you will get what you want, anyone would be silly not to right ??! :)

Great write !

Anthony ,
Awww a very touching piece ...but ya know some dreams do actually come true ...
I hope your does ..
A very creative write Anthony ...

That's a really sweet poem. It started off sad, then got a lot better, and the ending, was brilliant. Great job!