Comments : Sleep...forever

  • 18 years ago

    by Alicia

    Wow.... thats deep

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted~transistor

    Wow
    that is a really good poem
    ur good at writing..
    keep it up :P
    ~*~Me~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted~transistor

    Heyy.. sorry im commenting again but i duno hwo to send u a message..
    i wrote another poem.. its called "he killed her" plz read and tell me what u think :P

  • 18 years ago

    by sweet surprise

    Wow that really deep and really good! ur talented! i wrote a poem its called "Letting Go" could you chk it out and give me some feedback? thnx!

    *KaLiN*

  • 18 years ago

    by sweet surprise

    Aww..this is good! thnx for your comment! yea the guy is mean but ill always love him! but thnx for your comment! it means alot!! you should email me sometime! mine is tnkrbllbelevs32@aol.com

  • 18 years ago

    by rene

    To be honest i actually found that funny i dont know why i liked it alot it was very deep but i just laugh when i finshed it. im not being mean or anything but yeah that just what i tought :)