That's a GREAT poem! You should have no trouble reading it at church! It has such a nice flow that I forgot how long it was! Sincerely, Poetvoices :D

What an awesome poem. It is very relevent to today and the way people think about God and their faith. Great job.

This is an excellent poem, and I am sure that you will do fine if you read this on Christmas day, butI just have one question. Is it not a little long for you to read during a mass?

WOW! I thought that was amazing, it flowed so well and the idea was just beautiful! I wish i could write like that! That was inspiring!!!

This poem is very beautiful. It inspired me really!! =)

That poem flowed beautifully, and it has SUCH great meaning to it, awesome job! 5/5

Umm i only red the beginning and the end but it looks like its good