Beautiful Bill.. very discriptive and emotional.. I really enjoy reading your writing.. wish I could write like this.. Take care..:)

Bill - your talent yet again shines!! This is beautiful... A happy place awaits you :) Great work Bill (Or is Steve... LOL)

Wow, your talent truly shines through in this poem, it painted many pictures in my mind with vivid descriptions and beautiful emotions, you write so well you are a credit to CC&P and to this website!!! Inspirational, well done to you sir!

So touching, so beautiful...sort of like scenes from a movie. I love these lines:

"I can still hear you calling out to me luring me to your shore
Where I will stand and watch with wonder and awe like before"

as always, great write!

Beautiful poem! I loved it. Definitely voting on that.

Very touching and emotional, yet so beautiful...

Ohhh Bill....So touching and I'm just speechless...Your talent shines within your beautiful heart...

Love Ann

It was tight bill. I liked the way you ended it, and the way you made the sea feel like. Like I was looking at it for the first time, like a kid or something

Very very nice, finally someone who's work I'll enjoy reading! You're on my favs now my friend ^_^ Keep making things great! Kudos!

Your poem is to dissjointed it seems to hop around with out any mission .other than that i could have enjoyed it.although you have talent unfortunatly not in this work as much as in some of your other poems