I like this i think that it is cute.

Like this huni..so sweet.
I do that too..i write love poems about a love i dont have:S
chin up sweetie
xoxox

Oh WOW!!! I mean...WOW! You have an enormous amount of talent and someone I will have to add to my faves! This poem was beautifully written I'd love to hear it to music! Your a great writer and do keep it up!
Chelsey~

This had a great flow to it and rhymed very well. I think that this was an awsome love poem and I think that you have a lot of talent. Keep up the good work and I think that its a good idea to put this to music.