It's great! i think you did a really good job. 5/5

I liked it,really deep.
Though I should say you kinda messed up on your first part "flow threw my head." you meant to put "through" not "threw" as in past tentse of throw.Anyways hope you can check out some of my crap sometime...I don't ever get anyone looking at mine.Keep it up.

I am also a senior this year and I love your poem. It is just perfect!!! :)