I really like it!! its deep! your a good writer don't stop!! comment back if you would please!!

I really loved this poem, i was really really into it but then it just stopped. That really disappointed me. If you can i would jsut say maybe you can add a little more and it would be excellent!

Nice its soooo deep. sumtimes wen i read ur poems i can picture the things u write. i dont knw if thats a gud thing or bad. 5/5 great wrk.

I dont remember if i read this or not but i'll comment anyway good poem courts xox sam