Wow, I have to say, that is very cool. The images it brings to the mind are brilliant, like painting with words. You have a lot of talent. I cannot praise tis work enough. 7/5, if only it were possible. I can't wait to read the next part.

Wow i loved it great stuff seriously just great!

Yet again very good..
Love Always Tiffany Heather

Great imergry, and all in all a brilliant peice

Very good