All i have to say is DAMN!! That was a wanderful poem!! lotz better then what i have done but, check some of mine out!! i havent wrote many cause i jsut got this account but, yes take a look!!
Lotz a Love!
Holly Renae

Very good. Keep on writing, you do a very good job! i hope to read some more of your poems later! take care
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy