Wow this is a really good poem. I'm so sorry your father did this to you. And i hope for the best for you in the future. My thoughts and prayers are with you because of this. Keep in touch. --Lauren

Man I am sorry that this had to happen to you...I realy loved the poem. You did a great job at rhyming and putting everything together. Good Job.

::MELI::

Not all poems have to rhym, sad poems usually dont because they come from the heart.

5/5

Yeah, I know how you feel with the whole hitting thing but you did an awesome job with this poem, I loved it!

-Taylor

Your dad was horrible towards you and your brother, I would of been destroyed if that happened to me

Thanks everyone for the comments, And yes it has made me stronger.

It really means alot to me that you all care. Thanks heapz..

Omg this is soo sad. i my self have been abused but not physically i have heard lots of stories about sexual and emotional abuse but this is one of the first about physical. it's a terrible thing what your father did. and when it happens at such a little age it can stick in your mind forever. thanks for commenting on ma peom cum and check out others if ya want, i'll keep lookin at ur's. keep up the good work
luv edwina
xoxo

Usher thank you for commenting on my poem. I am so sorry what happened to you but I know it must have made you a better and stronger person. I know that I don't know you at all but please take care of yourself because this poem really broke my heart. This poem must've been really good cuz I reacted. I will be submitting more poems feel free later to read mine; They probably won't be as good as yours but I hope you still enjoy them. Bye.

Wow.. again you take my breath away great poem,
Take care

5/5!! Damn, what a life. Keep strong. Very, very ,very good poem.

Man p0werful w0rds.. g0od j0b th0ugh hun

Ur life was so hard,
u were so little, so innocent,
ur dad so evil, under the control of alcohol, of drugs,of other things maybe...
who deservs this??? no1!!! especially not u!!!
i think ur poems r fantastic and ur such a good writer!!!
so keep it up!

Wow... pretty powerful poem. I can almost picture it as i'm reading it. I'm sorry for all that you had to go through in life, but the important thing is that it made you stronger. Great job.

Wow, I don't even know what to say. Abuse is such a terrible thing, and i'm sorry to hear that you had to go through something like that... 5/5
*hugs *

Heidi

I read this poem and started crying its realy deep

Hey this is awsome it relates to me somewhat at least with my mom not my dad!!!

Hey ,
great poem..but i cant believe parents can be so selffish all the time..
but its really good !

also thank you for commenting mine

Holy crap! that was really good!