Comments : We Could Have Lasted For Forever

  • 13 years ago

    by Matters

    Really, Dory, that's your best poem yet. Awesome.

    Of course, I contributed two lines in the openeing stanza...?

    Hey, what can you expect from class with Mr. Arsenault?

    Haha...

    Awesome. Full points.

    Matt

  • 13 years ago

    by Matters

    Hey Dory--double comment--can you take my last name out of your profile? Please. Thanks. Call Me Matt Chunkymuffinhead instead.

    Matt

  • 13 years ago

    by JJ

    Its always sad to have love end this way and thinking about what could have been, it tears you up inside. especially when you know you've been used... good job

    btw, you have far more talent then you think... keep writing!

  • 13 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hey, this is good, I love it, I'm glad Matt get you into writing poems, you have the talent...