IT is very good... i like ur form and the rhyme sceme... and on my poem u didnt preach... lol thx btw for commenting! *hint/randomnesss* i comment on poems that no one comments on.. idk y i said that just thought ud know!!! lol ttyl

Hmm...has macbeth been inspiring, then, i presume? (this brought flashbacks of one of lady macbeth's soliloquys...so dark and moody)

hehe, great stuff here....my first sonnet was an ode to bubblegum..

~ lenny

Wow this is really beautiful! very true! yeah, i haven't been on for a while, not that i haven't been writing, but i never know whether to add my poems, becuz sometimes i never know what others will think... thanx for the comments, too! keep writing, you are sooo talented!!!