Comments : Why?!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Well thats not a poem but its passionate, and something im sure alot of use can relate to, All i can really say hunny is Chin up, Love happens when you least expect it and yes its hard to get over but when you do your a better and stronger person because of it, and it seems asthough Mr. Mike needs to get his act together, -hugs tight- im here if you need me Im sorry Im not much help I have slot on my mind but really if you need me Ill be there...

    Much love
    Jenn
    -hugs-

  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    Hahaha I wonder if all Mikes are the same -shakes head- I swear I am not like that. Your right its now a poem, but its still great work and it has great meaning.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding Mascara

    I dont know what your interpretation of a poem is... i presume its one where it has to rhyme.. but this is a poem, It might not be the classical style of poem but it is definantelly a poem.. i read the first and last three sentances and it seems alright but u mgh want to make it into paragraphs so its easier on the eyes

  • 18 years ago

    by confused!! (Jenn)

    Yea it may not be a poem but life does happen and i can say it has happen to me so keep up the good work