Im not sure about the title but loved the poem!

I love the poem as well.Sorry to say I also dont have a title.Maybe nope i dont know...sorry....but I'll keep thinking and get back to you...nice job

Really good, : )

This was very good and was an honor to have read for you keep up great writting

Wonderful..def 5/5

Wow!!! very good...i rele liked this poem it was very good!

That was very good, nice rhyming scheme. It flowed pretty well and such.

Try new styles you seem to have this type down. your using a 1212 rymeing theme.

try a 11 22 33 for ex.

instead of: Time is slowing passing
always going by
And as the groups are massing
Im starting to get high.

Try : As i sit and wonder
The sky begins to thunder
I start to dream of candy
On this night so bright and dandy

The trick is making it make sence : )
There a lot of different ways to write poetry you should look in to a few of them. On the poem it was ok, it had some faults but it was good. With a little work it'll be great. Keep writing Anthony.

HOLY CRAPPING CRAP
that was so deeply, emotionally, excellently. . .
sorry there are not many words to describne it other then im adding you to my favs and I love this poem
great read
love,
Em

Very sad but good 5/5

Wow...I'm speechless. This was an AMAZING poem. Sad poem, but LOVED it. Great job...5/5

I like it keep it up

Tess, I love this poem! Its soo good..so much emotion and depth. Truly amazing.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5

Dang this poem is hella good
i cant even top that ist way too good well um i would name it my suiicide

Very well done and well writen Great Job :)

I never realized how hard it would be to title someone else's work until now. I would say "exposed dieing rose", but whatever the title turns out to be, strong writing.

Grreat Poem!. i love the flow it has and there is a great idea behind the whole thing. your very tallented but i'm not sure of a title... i usually title my poems first so i know what i want to write about that day. but anyway. awesome poem! 5/5

I never realized how hard it would be to title someone else's work until now. I would say "exposed dieing rose", but whatever the title turns out to be, strong writing.

In a way thats sad i have no idea what you should name it i think who ever wrote the poem has the right to name it thierself you kno what i mean

Heyy Tess!

Well done, short sweet and well said! I couldnt and wouldnt change a thing, I dunno what to tell you, the poem was sheer ace in my mind keep it up hun cant wait for more

Love Jenn
PS: rated 6/5 lol