Wow im really sorry, like not one of those fake things. my dad doesnt beat me up but im so sensitive he may as well, i can at least take physical pain. thanx for the comment tho, im really confused about lot and my poems seem really confused to me too, but oh well theres emotion there sum where! maybe you could keep reading my stuff, and ill read yours, thanx

I love ur poems too they are awesome! i love these kinda poems
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Wot's happened to ur dad now? hopefully he's behind bars now. it's sad tho how people can get away with it soo easily. hopefully things will get better for you
luv edwina
xoxo

Your strong, i hope ur dad is behind bars, your poems are amazing keep it up

Blunt details. Not to long poem. Perfect sounding, or at least to me. It's very good. Reminds me of my childhood. Of a certain man I never want to see again too. Well, anyways. Good work!

I feel so bad for you. I wish you had not gone through all that. I feel like I want to protect you, YOU WERE ONLY 4!!! I am so sorry but he was an mean!! Take Care. Oh by the way 5/5!!! Bravo once again.

0hhh an0ther p0weful and em0ti0nal piece. g0od j0b 0nce again 0n expressin urself. keep it up

Man thats so sad! yeah kick his ass alright! ur poems r amazing and it shows uve been through a lot! keep up! :D