0h that was beautiful. g0od j0b 0n it. heartfelt p0em. keep it up! h0pe ur wish is granted

Awesome...

Thats so sweet.. makes me want that wish too.. just wish.. everything wil be ok... for eternal bliss??
anyways.. 5/5

That was truly an inspiring poem
your sucha good writer
5/5 deff

OH GOLLY - that was brilliant. It had a ice flow and technique which I thoroughly enjoyed. 5/5 =)

Wowwww babe i loved the last verse...it is soo amazingly written...
as they say...a poem from the heart never goes wrong...
you know what...i love your comments...they really make me smile....
and wow...*whispers* is that you in the display picture? youre *hush* beautiful.

take care
xoxoDhavaloxox

Amazing job. the only thing i can find wrong is this last two lines: The day you plant your lips for a kiss.
You will grant this one simple wish.
It seems so forced, about planting your lips. even if you switch kiss and lips around, or word it differently, lips and wish sound kinda alike so it'd sound more natural. otherwise amazing poem. loved it 5/5

The last stanza was my favorite. It made me want to read it again. You show so much passion in your writing. Also you seem to make evrything so perfect; the flow the words the everything 5/5 all the way

Pretty great, but i still like the one you entered in the comp better.
well written. Rock on,
Suzie