Um yeah really cool and all but your too smart for me with that it took to much effort to keep reading and all it wasn't really catching but still good job.

Awesome job!

The Japanese effect is very creative. The poem is really good, but I really like the japanese language :)

Brilliant! A touch of genius added to the poem. A good poem with a twist of something new. I liked it a lot, well done :)

AJ I loved it!! Its so different. No one else would think to do something like this. You're setting a new trend baby brother!

Great poem nice job. 5/5 fropm me. keep up the good wrk

The Japanese words kinda made it hard to read, however I like the fact that you tried something new.

You don't see many of us doing just that.

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