Wow, that contains a lot. a lot of questions and emotions and a feeling of total confusion. its very good. life is a lot like that, totally messed up.

great poem

Wow, great poem...as always!!!

Wow babe that is awsum as usual. dw its not confusing i actually know how it feels 2 b confused like that. soz if ur grandma is sick. thats really sad :(
with love always
amy

Great emotion. This poem is very sad and moving.

It's not messed up. If you want to hear of messed up lives, just talk to someone who lives in a war torn country. This is mild, or even average in a teenage life.

This poem is really sad, and it's terrible that this has happened to you. Don't worry, cheer up. Things turn out better with time.

Oh my god this is an amazing poem...and i understand how u feel...ok no i dont...even thoe i may have never been in ur shoes before i feel ur pain one way or another...and it really hurts and i understand that its very hard to stay strong...but u have to try...5/5 on this beautiful poem

Fantastic peice, full of feeling anf very powerful expression. the content is well composed and written, with a good flow thoughout.

5/5

A lot of emotion questions and turmoil crammed in to this piece. It flows well.