If anyone tells you this is crap
they dont know what poetry is
FLOW very few people use it I dont know why
I loved it thanks for the excellence
Love
Em
(sorry if the 'love' offends you I dont know if your a guy or girl)
You are now added to my favs

Wow this was truly amazing! Dont let anything stand in the way of your writing. Your writing is where your profession could begin! You are very talented! Love Tess xx

The end of the world or is it... leaves you contemplating

beautifull words and your Rhyme is really really good

keep up the work i look forward to seeing more of your poems

4/5

Very nice.

This is a very wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I can't wait for you to write more so I can rate and comment them. Keep up the excellent job. Always write your feekings down. They will make great poems.

Wow.... 5/5 really good

Well.......I guess that writing is in your jeans ur very talented keep it up!

Wow.. that was really amazing. You have talent, that's for sure. I can't wait to read more of your poems, they're truly moving.

This was my second favorite
Call me when u are gonna go on to chat so i know

Catherine Stephens(gurl from library)

Your poams sound very great your really go talent with the poams so keep writting
from a good friend
dorothy*

OH EM GEE. hi.k.
GUD POEM LOLZZ
:]!

I reallly like this poem it is good keep rightn like this an ull bcome famous lol

Wow Jeff-ness. Niiiiice poem my commercial friend. 5/5

-Your.No.1.Fan- LOL

Its really good! well done!! keep them up!!

No punctuation..makes it kind of weird..but your work was good...keep it up.

Lissa