I love this poem/song. Its a wonderful piece. I also want to thank you forthe advice. Its great to know you're not like, 30 or something. Kepp up the nice work and I will most definetly keep checking back.

This poem is beutiful just like everything else you have written! i can see this written as a song. me personally enjoy a little rhyme once n a while but this was a refreshing piece. i like the last 2 verses:) once again, well done-keep it up:)