I like this poem alot! keep it up im younger soo im not this good lol well comment back
--sara

Very impressive creative write Candy .

I am the wake you try to sleep
I am the reality you ignore
I am the good you try to keep
You are the one I trust no more
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The first stanza was simply my favorite .
So much emotion expressed and felt through-out.....

I am the hate in your tears
I am the sorrow in your eyes
I am the demon in you fears
You are the monster behind the lies

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I think you might have meant your in the 3rd line ...

Looking forward to reading more !