This is an amazing poem. The beginning was like a drug, I got hooked and kept wanting more. Then bam! the middle, and the end, wow. That was terrific! The last line, reminded me of a song by a band called Hawthorne Heights. Anyways, awesome stuff!

I absolutely adore this poem... It's so gritty... The scenery you've works perfectly. Definately one of my favourites. The best lines would have to be: "I have always loved you
Even in the darkest depths of vengeance
When I couldn't love myself" And "I am not like all those girls who
Throw themselves like the flowers at your feet
Under appreciated and dead
I just want to take our pain and frame it"
Beautiful. Amazing job. There was so much feeling in it.