Wow so much emotion and meaning in one poem is starting to rub off on to me
lol
that was great keep it up
Loving it!
Em

Oh wow. now that ones good...omg the one line "Leave and change my name to Joe" it made me laugh...but anyways im sorry you feel so sad. just know that you made a difference for me neil...read my new poem whenever u get the chance. its called Moon and Wind...cha cha cha, cherry

This dont suck =D
Its emotional and shows mixed up feelings! well done!
You added some rhyming to make it easy to read!

welldone x

Ohh this is very unique and beautiful, I love your style of writing, you're going on my faves list hun hehe, thanks for all your comments, take care,xxoo

Nice poem ummm leave me a comment on my poem untitled by breanna