Comments : Desperate Girl; Why do you stare?

  • 18 years ago

    by Caitlin

    Wow thats deep!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovesick 4 Jesus

    This poem is awesome girl. You are a very talented writer. You can check some of my poems out some time if you would like to. Love, Trisha

  • 18 years ago

    by Living4Him

    I love it!! It is exactly how I feel. YOu did a really good job. Keep writing and check out my poems sometime.

  • 18 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    Ok i swear that gave me shivers going up and down my spine and i nearly started crying my eyes out. You painted a picture for us all, you made us all feel something and in a world as cold and heartless as ours that's really something!!! It was really beautiful and if you ever need to talk you can always email me!! Keep it up and use all your feelings through to your poems...thats what makes them beautiful.
    luv jess xoxo (a friend if you need it)

  • 18 years ago

    by LyricalFlow

    Wow. Im lost of words at the moment hold up.........dat 1 really effected me, im still feeling all weird and stuff, i cant even explain it. Brilliant, excellent...i cant find words to describe it. Honestly all i can say is that it was WOW

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    This is my favourite.

    by far.