Comments : I am...A Friend no more!

  • Wow hun again another emotion filled poem form ya. i love readin your work. keep it up loves ya always crimson-pain xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, Awspme poem. I loved it. Has some good emotion within. kepp up the good work.

    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by why me

    Dang.........your good you now how to put it out there......she should forgive you nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I read this and sort of imagined a little boy at the window saying the words. It's quite sweet I guess. The ending is quite comforting, but I think you could've endowed on this alot more. Your lines are very basic and the beginning is a bit melodramatic for my liking. I do like the ending alot though. Nice work.
    -Laura.

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Neo, I liked this poem. Although..regreting what you have done isnt goinjg to solve much. You must tell him/her how you feel and make it alright between you both. If the person doesnt understand, give that person space to think. Nice work overall.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sami

    Awesome poem man
    really like it
    whos da person
    u gotta tell me/ or better yet u have to tell me!!

  • 18 years ago

    by SufferingAlone

    DAMN UR REALLY GOOD WHEN I PUT SOME POEMS ON MINE PLEZ CHECK THEM PUT