Good work, this poem has strong emotion in it.

This.. being the second poem ive read by you.. is yet again.. very good. well formatted. and thoughtout. i really liked this poem.
~David

Wow. so much emotion it was so good.

Hey.

I think this poem needs to be overhauled in terms of syllable count, because as it stands to me right now, it's a little uneven in the flow...though it's a fine topic and it never becomes too cliche.

Oh and modesty is a good thing in some cases, especially when somone who isn't makes brash claims to skill they perhaps don't possess to the fullness they describe.

Brilliant poem. its written very effectivly and has some very strong feelings within it