Awwwwwww, that's so saaaaaaaaaad

Hey, good poem, it has a lot of potential to become something so much more though. if i were you i would make it longer and break it up into stanzas. but great work!
Ben

I love this one its exceptional (short and spicy) keep it up babes

Hey Angel..
Great poem..
I know how you feel..
I've felt the same way..
Only I had thought of killing myself..
Just don't do that..
Please don't do anything that you wont be able to regret tomorrow..
This comment probably didn't help.
5/5 Great poem..
-Cloe

I liked it!

Great poem i really do like it!!! its really meaningful

I feel this way sometimes..so i understand.