This is truly dark and very well written! Though the poem is long and not broken into stanzas, it still keeps me going to the very end. The flow is great, it keeps the poem going good. A well thought out poem. Thanks for sharing! =)

I have a facination for vampires and a special place in my tiny black heart for them too. I like what you did with the transition of human to vampire, it does the imagination amazing justice. well written, very well written.