Well done! This is awesome! I especially love this stanza:

"But then her days were filled with dark,
Eclipse of her broken heart,
Empty, void of all good things,
But in the darkness she will sing..."

Just wow!

Oh and I also liked this stanza as well:

"I was cruel to play the field,
Then run back to become her shield,
Our friendship empty, void of all good things,
But through the darkness she could sing..."

Amazing piece, keep it up~Holly