Awww hun that is so sad, im sorry, pls remember im always here for you and im here to take care of ya

i loved the rhyming and your choice of words , pls keep it up!

Hayley i knew from the start you never did... maybe thats why I got over you so quickly anyway that girl? her name is victoria, before I fell dor you Vic was a close friend anyway bye

Great poem got my 5/5 keep it up ur great!!! xxxxx Jade xxxxx

The perfect end
The perfect begining
To the perfect life
That wasnt worth living

In this world nothing is perfect.
but your poem is perfect

Wow i absoulutley luv it your such a good writer the ending and the whole poems has such deep meaning thanx for commenting
cant wait to see what toher peoms you come up with your awsomeand i can relate to alot of your poems i think
xxx luv moniquexxxx 5/5

Wow. I love the ending! great work!