Loosing part of who you are
the only part of yourself you thought was good the only part worth keeping and its' lost to someone that has no right to take it or keep it

emotions and words are spilling from this poem

your style is making me envious
your use of words gaa soo not fair

10/10

Wow.... i dont even knoe wat to say u have a talent ... great job 10 /5

U are and unbelieveable writer i'm just glad that u shed ur light on my writing giving me the ok u are amazing i really love your writing it is really tkes me to another destination u are amazing kepp up the good work 5/5

Good work keep it up

It didn't catch my attention as much as the others did

Gurl from library
Catherine Stephens

OH.
yes. comment. mk. RLY.
j00 alien.

Has anyone ever told you... for a one year old.. you write brilliantly. Lol.
Well then.. I will just type what I always type.. Lovely poem 5/5.

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The first verse the second sentance wass a mouth full ot read..but this poem as well shows excellent worrk. best yet...

Lissa

Wow. well. this is the best one so far. The emotion was nice. And.. so was the flow. depth wasn't good at all. but yeah.

Overall Rating: 4.7/5