Hi nitin
this was again very nice. while reading this i think that it matches wid one of my hindi poems. i will submit it today only. i had written it sometime before. and i think its the rite time to submit it.
this shows that somewhere we both hav same chemistry!!!
take care, bharti

Totally agreed... i loved your rhyme scheme... I think " knowing my legs are paralyzed" was very touching...
keep writing.. this was awesome..

Much Love,
Ipsita

Wow i really like this one it is so true i love all ur poems..keep up the good work
xox

*sings*You used to say you thought of me, when you had been away.
But this time it seems to me, that away is where you'll stay* happy?? :P

I like this poem a lot, and specialy it is very whise. Because a lot of people have felt like this, but didn´t really show the world they did.
And I love the fact that you wrote on the bottum: *just my feelings* LOVE IT!!!!

In tough times almost all of goes thru these feeling , we question the very existence of God .But every thing sad or good has lesson to teach us to make us a better person , nothing last forever niether pain or happiness they are like seasons.......so stay strong and have faith, good times are just around the corner.

Best wishes
chavii.

This is fantastic! I can completely relate, I've been there and well still am really! I love poems that make you think and you did it wonderfully!

Thats amazing! you are so smart, youi ise words i've never even heard of! this is great!!
and thanks for your comments i appreciate it!
sammi xxx

Wow this is awesome..truly.
loved this bit:
"for so long so many times
he made me know the meaning of heart
for so long so many times
he made me know that when it beats, it hurt"
ur words are so wise and true.
Much love,
>torn -x.x.x-

No words to comment on this one. All I will say is excellent job writing it, its very heartfelt.

Love
Michelle

Nitin
I have questioned my faith many times. You always brought me back. I can understand feeling this way.

all this is now enough for me
time has come to turn the table
if this is how life is supposed to be
i'll rather die than to trust in fable

These lines really tore at my heart.
Great job expressing your feelings. I am so glad you know longer are feeling this way.
Love Cindy